In writing this week, we have been working on making our writing more interesting to read. We have been discussing WOW words - descriptive words that make our work more interesting. Words like:
enormous instead of big or icy instead of cold.
Below are some videos of our work using the website telescopictext.org - we started with a very simple sentence, then added WOW words and extra detail to make the sentence more interesting.
What do you think of our work?
I never knew that you could make I made a cup of tea into big 2 paragraphs. -Brier
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