Descriptive writing using WOW words

WALT use descriptive vocabulary in our writing.  

WOW words are interesting words we can use in our writing to make it more interesting.  How many WOW words can you spot in these pieces?

The dark blue deep water was blasting with loudness on the heavy rocks. The blue water is on the people. There are big trees that are like nikau palms. The sunny bright sun is shining down on the warm beach. The warm sand is tickling in the water. By Aloysius

There is a dark blue  and  trees and some people on surf boards.  And people swimming  and I can hear waves.  By Bosston

The people   are splashing in the bright  blue sea.  Theres’ people  playng in the sand.  some people talking.  People  are playing  in the sea.  Tall  skiny  trees.  I see people relaxing.  By Elijah

The people are walking on the grass and the people are playing with the sea  shells and sand.  The wind is blowing the dark blue sea.  By Fonua

To read more of Room 8's awesome descriptions please go to our wiki page.