There is a dark blue sea. The tall, huge trees are bending. There are people lying on the hot sand. There are people laughing out loud. I saw the colourful ball hit over the High net.There are small seagulls over my head. I heard the big splashing waves. I can see people on there awesome surf boards.
Kevin
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ReplyDeleteToday was awsome.
ReplyDeleteI like your wow words Kevin, they make me picture a beach in my mind! Next time, to make your work even better, you could try to use some uncommon wow words (so instead of big, you could write giant or massive).
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work Kevin :)
Miss Bolton
I enjoy reading your story because your story is good and you have interesting words in your story:). It made me smile:) Because you used lots of detail in your story:)
ReplyDeleteI didn't know that you made a paragraph in your story:)
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