Today Miss Bolton challenged Room 8 to write a story in 15 minutes. Each person chose a setting from a list on the board, then had 15 minutes to write. Every one took this challenge very seriously, nothing could be heard apart from fingers tapping on keyboards.
After the time was up, we all shared our writing with another person and we had to make a comment on their writing. Then we had time to share our writing with the class.
Room 8 were so involved with our writing that they convinced Miss Bolton to let them carry on writing!
Here are the links to our writing:
Destiny's writing
Kaleb's writing
Steadfast's writing
Lihai's writing
Ofa's writing
Phoenix's writing
Tui's writing
Brier's writing
Ana's writing
Susana's writing
Layton's writing
Robin's writing
Karll's writing
Tapu's writing
Antonio's writing
Kaumea's writing
Tara's writing
Sonny's writing
Amazing writing guys. My personal favourite one is Brier's writing. I really like how you described what was going on really well.
ReplyDeleteAwesome!! Maybe next time you could add more punctuation so it is easier for the reader to read.
ReplyDeleteAmazing Guys. My Favourite one is Briers. So Descriptive.
ReplyDeleteWell done Layton. I am really impressed. Keep up the great work.
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