Room 8's writing

In writing this week, we have been working on making our writing more interesting to read.  We have been discussing WOW words - descriptive words that make our work more interesting.  Words like:
     enormous instead of big    or      icy instead of cold.

Below are some videos of our work using the website telescopictext.org - we started with a very simple sentence, then added WOW words and extra detail to make the sentence more interesting.

What do you think of our work?

2 from mbolton on Vimeo.

1 from mbolton on Vimeo.